Atar’Atah’s Reading Journal

Book reviews and recommendations.

Tithe November 24, 2007

Black, Holly (2002). Tithe: A Modern Faerie Tale. NY : Simon and Schuster. 331 pages.

Kaye redefines weird – she doesn’t go to school, she doesn’t quite look like everyone else, and – oh yeah – she gets visits from faeries that no one else can see. Or at least she did, before she moved to Philly with her mom. But when an unexpected attack sends both Kaye and her mother back to the Jersey shore, she gets pulled into the world of faerie – a world, it turns out, that she belongs to more than she’d ever guessed.

Tithe

Usually I can steamroll right through books, but I had to put this one down more than a few times, for various reasons – none of them were bad reasons – they were just… well, here they are:

1. omg, yaoi fanboy, what?!

Corny. One of the more important side characters, Corny (short for Cornelius), is ethically challenged, a genius, and gay. He’s also an avid reader of shonen ai manga (translation: homoerotic japanese comic books, generally written by and for women). Well, he calls it shonen ai, but as Kaye helpfully describes some of the scenes in said manga, I’m actually guessing it’s yaoi, which is basically the same thing, plus more porn.

Let me be clear: I did not need to put the book down because I have a problem with people who are queer, intelligent, or fans of pornography.  Rather, I had a problem with the way the book used these aspects of his character to portray him as a person who has no regard for the lives of other people, or would be receptive to getting raped and brutalized.  It’s a valid and consistent character portrait, but it’s also an extremely offensive way to portray a specific group of people, in that it implies that one’s taste in porn could predispose a person to want to be raped.  Or that being smart means you want to gun down your classmates.

I’m relatively sure that the author didn’t intend her character to be offensive, but in my case, I was a little taken aback.

2. tortured hero? srsly, pls…

Roiben. Roiben is a faerie knight of the Seely Court (the relatively good and nice group of faeries), who is traded to the Unseely Court by his queen. In the Unseely Court, he is forced to carry out his new queen’s horrible orders, and is thus traumatized into becoming a brooding, dark anti-hero. And Kaye falls for him like I fall for chocolate donuts. I’m not saying I don’t sympathize – back in the day, I myself liked a platinum blond tortured hero or two. And Roibin is far from the worst incarnation of this little archetype, but… really…

3. Jersey shore, land of hidden magic?! XD

This time, I put the book down because I had to pause and savor my smug glee that yes, someone else sees the dirty, glittery, and wildly natural Jersey shore the same way I do. And, for once, the faeries (angels, demons, winged monkeys, etc…) don’t live in Central Park, NY, but a place I actually know and care about – and let me tell you, it is the perfect setting for this book. It sets the mood, reflects Kaye’s character, and foreshadows the nature of the faerie courts. Just – wow, I had so much love for the setting.

Alright. Now, putting all that aside, I really did enjoy this book. This is one of the better things to come from the faery/fairy stories that are becoming popular recently, and there was a lot of sensitivity and depth in all the characters. And after all, I may have put the book down more than once, but I always, always picked it up again.

Booktalk Hook: Did you ever think that you just couldn’t possibly be related to these people who are pretending to be your parents?

If you like this book: You’ll probably want to read the sequels, Valiant and Ironside. Or you might want to try testing out the shallow end of the pool of manga that this book is referencing, both in the text, and thematically – titles like Seimaden, Angel Sanctuary, or Alichino.

 

Flora Segunda November 19, 2007

Wilce, Ysabeau (2007). Flora Segunda: Being the Magickal Mishaps of a Girl of Spirit, Her Glass-Gazing Sidekick, Two Ominous Butlers (One Blue), a House with Eleven Thousand Rooms, and a Red Dog ,the Tygers of Wrath series. Orlando : Harcourt. 431 pages.

After you get past the title, I’m not sure a summary is really needed for this book. But here it is: Flora Segunda is on the cusp of her 14th birthday, an age that means she’ll officially be an adult, and have to go off to the barracks to be trained as a warrior, like the rest of her noble family. But as much as Flora doesn’t really enjoy trying to do all the housework in her family’s castle, Crackpot Hall, or taking care of her insane father, she wants to become a warrior even less. Things start to look up, however, when she discovers her family’s banished butler, Valefor, who agrees to give her a helping hand… for a price, anyway.

Flora Segunda

With a basic – and somewhat predictable – fantasy plot, there are three things that make this book stand out. One, the characters. Two, the language/slang usage.

Flora herself isn’t a particularly ground breaking character. In fact, if you’ve ever read a novel that had a spunky heroine with red hair (bonus points if said hair is curly), you’ve met Flora. Mind you, she’s one of the better, and less romanticized versions of this stock fantasy archetype, but… there’s nothing really new here. However, the supporting characters are truly mold breaking. Flora’s mother is the general of her country’s army, and is portrayed with a lot of nuanced sensitivity as she busts through gender stereotypes as a dictatorial and remote father figure. Meanwhile, Flora’s father is crazy. Taken captive as a prisoner of war, and forced to watch his oldest daughter (the original Flora) be killed, he spends all of his time alternately pining and throwing fits. At least for the first half of the book, anyway. As it turns out, he’s one of the most dynamic characters in the book. Flora’s “glass-gazing sidekick,” Udo, is also wonderfully alternative, being at once both manly and metro. Wilce has created a world in which gender as we know it doesn’t really exist, and Udo, obsessed with haberdashery, is one of the best ways she drives that point home. Finally, there’s Valefor, who is fabulously whiny, petulant, charming, and self-centered.

While I liked the characters pretty much whole-heartedly, I’m a little more reserved about the “slang” that they used. For the most part, it came off as silly, and while a lot of the book is intentionally silly (Crackpot Hall?) – I think the language was the part that came off as a little condescending, in that “I’ll make new, family friendly curse-words for my characters to use,” way that – just always sort of bugs me a little. Like, frak, do you really think kids aren’t going to know what you’re frelling saying? I understand the motive – but I don’t have to like the execution, especially if it’s really wince-worthy. On the other hand, the slang was definitely original, including colorful phrases like, “pigface psychopomp.” And some of the subtler touches, like the use of “ayah” or “ayah so” for yes/ok, did a really good job of creating a sense of exoticism, without being hard to interpret or overly cute.

The world was also fairly interestingly constructed, as though someone took Aztec, Roman, and Celtic cultures and put them in a blender with demonology myths. I’m assuming there is more to come in the series, so I’m looking forward to seeing a little bit more of it.

If you liked this book: Why not look up some information on the Lesser Key of Solomon, an old and famous grimoire that provide the mythological basis for the characters of Valefor and Paimon? Of course, me, I recognized the names from playing Shadow Hearts: Covenant

 

The Warrior Heir November 15, 2007

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Chima, Cinda Williams (2006). The Warrior Heir. NY: Hyperion Books for Children, 426 pages.

Jack is an ordinary teenager living an ordinary life in ordinary Ohio. Until he forgets to take his necessary-for-living medicine and realizes that, not only does he not immediately die, he’s actually become much better at soccer – and a few other things. Because Jack’s “medicine” was actually a drug intended to suppress Jack’s latent super powers and hide him from a secret society of people who want to use him as a pawn in an old and violent political game.

The Warrior Heir

This book was excellent – the only thing I didn’t like was Jack. Actually, I didn’t hate him either, he’s just a sort of “everyman” character that it was hard for me to get behind (seriously, his name is “Jack” – you can’t get more everyman than that). He has a fabulous array of conflicts that work really well to enhance the suspense of the novel, but… I just couldn’t connect with him. The other characters, however, won me over immediately, from his overly charismatic aunt to his befuddled friends.

The book is also well plotted – strong action scenes work side-by-side with a complicated weave of emotional and political conflict. The history of the secret society is worked in deftly, so that you don’t feel like you’re getting smacked in the face with EXPOSITION the way you do in some fantasy novels. However, that could be because the magical society doesn’t really feature much in the book except to create narrative tension. Jack doesn’t even really experience it until the very end, and the only part he really interacts with is the Tournament o’ Death. So while the author does an excellent job of making the presence of the society felt, it doesn’t really exist other than peripherally in the narrative. And, unlike the magical otherworld that exists in many novels, this otherworld has seemingly no redeeming features. The citizens are focused on a bloodthirsty struggle for political domination, and very little else. Hopefully this will be expanded on in the sequel, The Wizard Heir.

Narratively, the book worked very well, expect for a slight lull in the middle where Jack is training. While there are some interesting character conflicts that are building at this point, it isn’t clear how important they are until the end of the novel. However, once the ending begins, the book really hits its stride. All the plot threads come together, and there are some very suspenseful moments – and a LOT of surprises. The conclusion was unexpected and perfect. I won’t give too much away, but it included a poignant and well foreshadowed deus ex machina.

If you liked this book: Why not try out the Percy Jackson series, starting with The Lightning Thief? I hesitate to call it a Harry Potter knock-off, but it really is – however, this series has it’s own merits, especially in the way it looks at those with disabilities.

 

Dragon’s Keep October 27, 2007

Filed under: YA Lit, angst, fantasy, young adult — ataratah @ 9:06 pm
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Carey, Janet Lee (2007). Dragon’s Keep. Orlando, FL: Harcourt. 302 pages.

Rosalind will be the 21st Queen of Wilde Island, prophesied by Merlin to restore honor to the Pendragon family and to end an unspecified war. But Rosalind’s mother is more concerned about the prophecy than her daughter is, and she’s definitely more worried about Rosalind’s ring finger – which just happens to be a dragon’s talon.

Dragon’s Keep

I had some problems with this book – while the conflict is certainly interesting, it refuses to map out on paper. By my count, there are four characters that could be counted as antagonists: Demetra (the creepy witch), Rosalind’s desperate mother, Faul (the irate and anti-human dragon) , and Magnus (the creepy wizard). And Rosalind, when she comes into conflict with these antagonists, loses every time. Or, rather, her triumph generally comes through her allies, characters connected with her and acting on her behalf. This makes, you can imagine, for a less than compelling heroine.

The tone of the book is light on the fun, and heavy on the angst. Rosalind is, according to the other characters, a charming girl, however she spends most of the narrative arguing, or sulking. And she’s gets progressively more depressed as the novel continues, and (of course) can’t eat and wastes away (and then is forced onto a dragon-style Atkins Diet) until she loses all of her “womanly curves” (oh no!) I like fantasy, but there’s a difference between “fantasy” and “completely divorced from real life” When I get depressed? I eat too much chocolate, and get more “womanly curves” than I can handle – and I bet the majority of readers are more like me than not. Basically, Rosalind fails at being a sympathetic or likable protagonist. Her relationship with her mother is compelling, deep, and interesting, but the novel really doesn’t finish exploring it, and rather neglects her relationships with the other characters as a consequence. Her relationship to the baby dragons she raises (the key relationship, plotwise, of the novel) is severely underdeveloped. No affection is shown on either side, though the author plots the novel as though it exists. Likewise her love for whatsisname.

On the other hand, the plot is very interesting, if a trifle predictable – there’s a wonderful combination of fairy tale, history, and mystery that made it hard for me to put the book down, despite my lack of affection for Rosalind.

Booktalk Hook: Of course most parents want their children to be perfect, whether or not their kids can take the pressure of their expectations. But Rosalind’s mother takes “pushy mom” to a whole new level.

If you liked this book: You might want to try Patricia C. Wrede’s fabulously fun Enchanted Forest Chronicles, starting with Dealing with Dragons, the story of another princess who learns the joys of working for a dragon employer.